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Dear Professor M.M

I'm applying to the PhD program in chemical engineering at UBC for fall 2016, and I'm especially interested in your research areas such as water treatment and CFD. My previous research experience is in supercritical CO2 membrane formation and extraction , but I am also interested in water treatment, CFD and environment .

 I would like to learn more about your work, particularly your paper on “Computational fluid dynamics (CFD) modeling of VUV/UV photoreactors for water treatment”. My experience in remediation of volatile hydrocarbon contaminant in soil taught me fundamental of fluid movement in porous media and also oxidation of hydrocarbons, so I am especially intrigued by the connections between the UV oxidation system chemical  oxidation development. Is this something that I could explore in a rotation with your lab? Are you currently accepting new graduate students?

 If you have the time, I would love to discuss this with you by email or video chat. I am also happy to tell you more about myself and my background, and can provide copies of my transcripts upon request.

my Short CV:

M.Sc. in chemical engineering, (GPA: 17.41/20), Sharif University of Technology, Tehran, Iran (2011-2013).

Thesis: To make the membrane for drug retard release by supercritical system

Supervisor: Professor Iraj goodarznia

The grade of master thesis: (20/20).

B. Sc. in Physics, (GPA: 16.23/20), University of Semnan, Semnan, Iran (2007-2011).

 Thanks for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon!

 Sincerely,

Saeed Taji
M.Sc. in chemical engineering
Department of Chemical and Petroleum Engineering
Sharif University of Technology
Tehran
Iran