10-02-2014, 02:39 PM
سلام مرسی از راهنماییتون. من این متن را خیلی با عجله نوشتم والان یک متن دیگر با یک سری تغییرات مینویسم که فکر میکنم شاید بهتر باشه لطفآ این را هم برام تصحیح کنید.
Last year, when we were returning home from a trip to northern iran, a bad accident happened in front of us. A car with four passengers capsized. When we saw this scene, we got out off the car to help the vehicle occupants. After approaching the car accident, we found that passengers in the car are trapped and sever bleeding. Then we tried to get them out of the car, it was very difficult because there are two individuals who were unconscious. While we were removing them, two peopl also came to help them. After a few minutes we were able to bring the wounded out of the overturned car. Unfortunatly one of them was dead when the ambulance arrived, but the rest were taken to the hospital and hope they are still alive. After this incident, i feel happy because i was able to help them.
Last year, when we were returning home from a trip to northern iran, a bad accident happened in front of us. A car with four passengers capsized. When we saw this scene, we got out off the car to help the vehicle occupants. After approaching the car accident, we found that passengers in the car are trapped and sever bleeding. Then we tried to get them out of the car, it was very difficult because there are two individuals who were unconscious. While we were removing them, two peopl also came to help them. After a few minutes we were able to bring the wounded out of the overturned car. Unfortunatly one of them was dead when the ambulance arrived, but the rest were taken to the hospital and hope they are still alive. After this incident, i feel happy because i was able to help them.
