03-09-2013, 10:35 PM
بله من بدون مطالعه اینکه انگلیسی ها چطور این معانی که من مطرح کردم رو مطرح می کنن این نوشته رو نوشتم در واقع فارسی رو به انگلیسی تبدیل کردم !
در مورد رایتینگ هم گفتم که اولین رایتینگم بود !
نوشتم که اشتباهاتم رو بفهمم و ممنون که برخی از آنها رو بهم گفتی پاتریک جان ؛ )
در مورد رایتینگ هم گفتم که اولین رایتینگم بود !
نوشتم که اشتباهاتم رو بفهمم و ممنون که برخی از آنها رو بهم گفتی پاتریک جان ؛ )
The subject " how could computers be considered a hindrance "
In my point of view, The computers have good effects on our lives while they may have negative effects on our lives 'too.[font] We can't ignore it that the computers are one of the most important parts of our lives.
As you know, Everything can be harmful if we don't use it in the correct way.
About the computer, It can be harmful if we use it without any purpose.
The negative results can destroy our lives; Here I point to some of them :
- Negative effect on our communication skill.
- Fills all of our time so we won't have enough time for more important (مسائل) such as our family, our friends etc.
- Our bones will be damaged by don't moving for a long time.
- Our eyesight will be decreased
Wait ! Don't worry ! I have good news for you ! Every problem has a certain solution !
And the solutions are :
- To improve the communication skill, we can register on forums such as academiacafe.com
- To don't allow computers to fill all of our time, We can plan carefully and have a good time management so we can manage our time effectively.
- To keep our bones in a good condition, We should stop every 20 minutes and have some movements.
- And finally, to don't harm our eyesight, We should see other things every 15 minutes and we shouldn't focus on the screen for a long time without any break.
In summary, We should learn it that It's a must to use tools in it's correct way and the computers are one of them. So let's start from now ! We " The humans " will not allow tools that we made ourselves to decrease the quality of our lives because we invented them to have a better world ! Don't we !?
پاتریک خیلی سعی کردم بهترین عملکردم رو داشته باشم
قبلی رو خیلی بی دقت و سر سری نوشته بودم
لطفا ایرادات این رایتینگم رو هم بگو خیلی ممنون می شم
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In my point of view, The computers have good effects on our lives while they may have negative effects on our lives 'too.[font] We can't ignore it that the computers are one of the most important parts of our lives.
As you know, Everything can be harmful if we don't use it in the correct way.
About the computer, It can be harmful if we use it without any purpose.
The negative results can destroy our lives; Here I point to some of them :
- Negative effect on our communication skill.
- Fills all of our time so we won't have enough time for more important (مسائل) such as our family, our friends etc.
- Our bones will be damaged by don't moving for a long time.
- Our eyesight will be decreased
Wait ! Don't worry ! I have good news for you ! Every problem has a certain solution !
And the solutions are :
- To improve the communication skill, we can register on forums such as academiacafe.com
- To don't allow computers to fill all of our time, We can plan carefully and have a good time management so we can manage our time effectively.
- To keep our bones in a good condition, We should stop every 20 minutes and have some movements.
- And finally, to don't harm our eyesight, We should see other things every 15 minutes and we shouldn't focus on the screen for a long time without any break.
In summary, We should learn it that It's a must to use tools in it's correct way and the computers are one of them. So let's start from now ! We " The humans " will not allow tools that we made ourselves to decrease the quality of our lives because we invented them to have a better world ! Don't we !?
پاتریک خیلی سعی کردم بهترین عملکردم رو داشته باشم
قبلی رو خیلی بی دقت و سر سری نوشته بودم
لطفا ایرادات این رایتینگم رو هم بگو خیلی ممنون می شم
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SBA - UNIVERSITY OF TEHRAN
