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آفلاین nastaran1992
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#101
04-06-2018, 04:18 PM
سلام. ممنون میشم نظرتون رو راجب این متن بگید و بگین فکر میکنین چه نمره ای ممکنه بگیرم.

Do you agree whit spending money on space or prefer we spend that money for the earth?
 
I love everything that is somehow related to space; even my role model is Elon musk who spend most of his career life on space science; but I believe, sometimes we are obsess with space. It is good to know about other planet and space but in my view, there is so many things need to be done, here in our own planet, earth.
 
Firstly, we face more economical issues each single day. Every morning that I turn the television on I hear about economic problems which we are faced to. Even well developed countries like the united states has this type of problems too. So I believe, maybe we can cut some of the budget which is dedicated to the space institutions like NASA and use that money for solving other problems. The day when Trump announced that he has decided to decrease the budget of NASA I was a little depressed but after some days I said to myself, maybe it’s better. At least they can spend that money for solving bigger problems and help people in a better way. Why so, if you use the money for making more job opportunities it will be better rather than spending it for exploring in space.
 
Secondly, we have so many things need to be done on the earth. However, political men are doing their best to solve problems, but I think they have not done enough works yet. Still we have so many homeless people whom the number of them increase every day and we must do something for them. Beside that we have so many environmental problems like greenhouse gasses which have a deep effect on the life of humans and animals as well. In my eyes, we have not done enough things to overcome this kind of problems and solve them. Beside these two problems, we have so many other problems which we must do some works on them and all of them are highly money consuming. So if we still spend lots of money on space exploring annually it will be unwise.
 
To cut the long story short, I believe that increasing our knowledge about what is happening in the space is important but not till the day we have so many problems in the earth. Every day we are spending too much money for exploring life on other planets while the life on the earth is in a high risk and there is so many things which we can do to make the life for everyone better. Maybe if we spend enough money for solving the problems we have on earth, we do not need to find another planet which we can live on it, why so, without all those problems, the earth will be good enough.
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#102
04-06-2018, 04:19 PM
ممنون میشم در مورد این متن هم نظرتون رو بگین


DO YOU PREFER SPEND YOUR LEISURE TIME WITH OTHERS AR BE ALONE?
 
I like to spend my leisure time with so many people, no matter I know them or it is the first time I meet them. I just like to have this chance to meet new people and spend my time with them. There is lots of reasons why I prefer this way but here I mention to two of them only.
 
Firstly, I can learn so many new skills from other people. If you meet different people, you can learn so many things from them; why so I believe each person has at least one amazing life experience or skill and you can learn from them by spending your free time with them. I remember last year we had a big party for new year and we invited all of our family friends and also asked them to invite their friends on behalf of us too. In that party I meet a young lady, Mina who was a master chief in an Italian restaurant. That day I could learn so many amazing ways to cock Italian foods in an easy and fast way. Just some months later I participated in a charity food competition and I cocked one of those Italian foods which I learned from Mina. I could win the first place and sold my food for a good price and had this chance to give all the money to a cancer charity institution. If we did not have that big party and if I hadn’t met Mina that day I couldn’t win the competition and help people who suffer from cancer.
 
Secondly, spending time with others is more fun rather than being alone. I am kind of person who will become depressed easily so I prefer to spend my free time with others and do some funny activities with them. Last summer I decided to set a special plan for my vacation, so I called to some of my friends and ask them whether they like to join me for a backpack traveling or not. Hopefully all of them agreed and on a beautiful and sunny day we started our long trip. In that trip, one night we lost our way when we were in a jungle. It was late at night and we did not have any idea about how we can find our way. Suddenly I looked up into the sky and said “oh guys, look at the stars. We just learn about them in school. Let’s try to find our way by them.” However, I was not sure about how exactly I should find the way by the stars but one of our friends, Nataly knew about sky and stars and helped us to find our way. Till that night I did not know how I should use stars as navigators and all I was learned in school was really vague to me. But that night Nataly could teach us so many things about stars and how we can ask them for a help as a natural GPS. And this could not happen if I wanted to spend my free time alone at home. 
 
To cut the long story short, I believe, it is good to have some free time which we spend them by ourselves. In these times we can think about different things which we cannot completely focus on them when we are with other people. but in my view, spending time with other people have so much more advantages than being alone. In this way, based on two explained reasons plus so many more reasons I prefer to spent my leisure time with others doing something funny rather than being alone.
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#103
18-09-2018, 11:03 AM (آخرین تغییر در ارسال: 18-09-2018, 11:04 AM توسط egro82.)
با سلام لطفا نظرتون رو در باره این متن بفرمایید.

Question: It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is undeniable that building any structure in any neighborhood could be beneficial to local economy so if such a plan exist for my neighborhood i will support it completely.

Actually it is a popular topic which caused heated debate for a long period of time because it can affect everybody in his/hers daily lives.

From my point of view building a new movie theater could be beneficial in numerous ways so I personally totally support this plan. There exists countless factors which influence my opinion; two of those are as fallows.

 

The main aspect to point out is economic effect of building a new movie theater. It is obvious that building new movie theater will create many jobs and will support many local businesses during it's construction and later during it's active life span. For example building a big building like a movie theater will create jobs in construction section and transportation section. All building are complex set of raw materials which needed to be bought from local stores so they will improve local economy tremendousley. So building a new movie theater effect on local economy is really clear and it has potential to improve local economy and create some opportunity for local business to expand.

 

A further more subtle point is it's effect on local culture. A new movie theater has potential for new shows, new entertainment and it can actually support creativity within local population. For example young generation can see classic performances and acts. They even can perform themselves  in the new theater. Obviously a new movie theater means more entertainment option for families so it can be important  in this manner as well.

 
From what discussed above we may finally reach the conclusion that building a new movie theater have some positive impact and must be supported by everybody.
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18-09-2018, 03:40 PM (آخرین تغییر در ارسال: 18-09-2018, 03:44 PM توسط automotive.)
(18-09-2018, 11:03 AM)egro82 نوشته:
با سلام لطفا نظرتون رو در باره این متن بفرمایید.

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سلام
من نظر خودم رو اعلام می‌کنم، دوستان مجرب هم اگر وقت داشته باشند کمک خواهند کرد.
1. واژه‌‎ی i بدون استثنا در متن با حرف بزرگ نوشته میشود: I
2. نقطه برای پایان جمله است، اگر جمله ادامه دارد با ویرگول جدا کنید و ادامه دهید.
3. املای کلمه‌ی tremendousley اشتباه است که معمولا یک دو علط املایی در تمام متن نادیده گرفته می‌شود.
4. در قسمت نتیجه باید نظر خودتون رو حمایت کنید و به نظر من اعلام اینکه با دلایل اعلام شده ما به این نتیجه می‌رسیم در اینجا اصل پاسخ به سوال تافل رو زیر سوال میبره،
به نظر من اگر مینوشتید که با دلایل اعلام شده من از این موضوع حمایت میکنم و باقی جمله بهتر میشود.
5. هر فردی یک تمپلت برای خودش دارد شاید برخی از تمپلت های مرسوم استفاده کنند اما به طور کلی به نظر من شما از تمپلت خاصی استفاده نکردید.
شما برای تایید گفته های خود 2 دلیل بیان کردید. یک Writing به طور کلی سه قسمت دارد: Introduction , body, conclusion معمولا هر کدام یک پاراگراف و برای body معمولا بیش از یک پاراگراف در نظر گرفته می‌شود (هر پاراگراف معمولا یک دلیل و مثال های آن دلیل را شامل میشود)، به نظرم Introduction شما میتواند یک پاراگراف باشد و 3 پاراگراف برای مقدمه زیاد است. برای مثال من پاراگراف اول شما را بدون تغییر متن از 3 به 1 پاراگراف تبدیل کردم که مشاهده میکنید چه تغییری حاصل شده.
بابت کلمات استفاده شده، اصطلاحات، گرامر و موارد مشابه نیز امیدوارم دوستان مجرب زمان داشته باشند تا راهنمایی کنند، من فقط مواردی که به نظرم میرسید رو گفتم.

در نهایت هم اینکه به جز 1 و 2، سایر موارد نظر شخصی من هستند و شاید با نظر شخصی دیگران متفاوت باشد، امیدوارم بهترین نتیجه در این امتحان برای شما حاصل شود.
Question: It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is undeniable that building any structure in any neighborhood could be beneficial to local economy so if such a plan exist for my neighborhood i will support it completely. Actually it is a popular topic which caused heated debate for a long period of time because it can affect everybody in his/hers daily lives. From my point of view building a new movie theater could be beneficial in numerous ways so I personally totally support this plan. There exists countless factors which influence my opinion; two of those are as fallows.
 
The main aspect to point out is economic effect of building a new movie theater. It is obvious that building new movie theater will create many jobs and will support many local businesses during it's construction and later during it's active life span. For example building a big building like a movie theater will create jobs in construction section and transportation section. All building are complex set of raw materials which needed to be bought from local stores so they will improve local economy tremendousley. So building a new movie theater effect on local economy is really clear and it has potential to improve local economy and create some opportunity for local business to expand.

A further more subtle point is it's effect on local culture. A new movie theater has potential for new shows, new entertainment and it can actually support creativity within local population. For example young generation can see classic performances and acts. They even can perform themselves  in the new theater. Obviously a new movie theater means more entertainment option for families so it can be important  in this manner as well.

From what discussed above we may finally reach the conclusion that building a new movie theater have some positive impact and must be supported by everybody.
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