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[Pink Floyd]

knowledge or experience?
In my viewpoint, we cannot say exactly which one is better or more important than the other. Both of them play a vital role in our life; moreover, we need them for thriving (to reach our goals) in our life and career; thus, I am going to discuss the effect of them on our life.
As you know, we start to go school since we are 7 years old; besides, we spend years in schools studying different books to learn a lot of things which are essential for our feature. But we observe the things which has been written in books, we would notice that all of this information located in books is the result of gained experiences of experiments by people in the past; hence, reading books just helps us to obtain more information about facts which are (must be deleted) exist around of (must be deleted) our environments and be able to find our way in the feature. As a case in point we can consider books which are study in universities and colleges (?). they just give information about facts which were explored in the past and books cannot say everything more than about them; thus (?), we should search about (must be deleted) new things and gain experience about unknown phenomenon.

on the other hand, we cannot learn a lot of things into books; moreover, in this place we can understand the importance of experience. for instance, when we communicate with other children in school we start to learn from them about how we should behave with (must be deleted) others and find friend or how we can be in relation with others and how we should respect to rules. all of them need experience which we cannot find in books. we should learn from our environmental places and other people. this experience will be with us for all of our life and we never forget them unlike information in books.
to sum up, I think both of books and experience are fundamental for us .with helping of them we can warranty our life and feature and they are not separated from each other.

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