28-11-2011, 12:55 AM
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As far as history is concerned, people always looked for the best way to prepare their food easier. making food process need a lot of time; thus people had to spend a lot of their time to prepare. their food. Today, traditional making foods evolves to modern techniques which descries time to making food. preparing food effects on people life is a controversial issue which has its own advantage and disadvantage therefore we should consider It from different aspects.
Nowadays, with the advent of freezers and refrigerators, people are able to keep their foods for a long time; in addition to, they don’t need to spend time to get their requirement foods every day. utilizing of new technologies helps people to save more money and foods remain fresh more than before; moreover, inventing of microwave helps people to spend less time to cook their food and they can use their time in another ways which need more time.
another advantage of using of new modern is conservators and another ways that use to keep foods more fresh; as point in this case we can mention to smoking and half-baked foods and using artificial additions can help us to keep food for more times and preserve them of corrupting.
on the other hand, we found that using new methods are economic ways for people to do not waste their time and money in making foods. View of the fact that they have disadvantages which threat people life. Having obesity, blood pleasure, cancers are example of illnesses which lead to using new methods of conserving foods. for instant, using microwave in cooking food in the minimum time causes that food become rare cooked; moreover, many part of food be unripe. this matter causes to germs and bacteria gather in this places as a result people become sick.
to sum up, using modern new modern to preparing food me be economical way in a first look and people able to do more work in a less time but in the long time they can causes to new problems like disease that make people spend their time and money for curing that it can be a enormous problem
As far as history is concerned, people always looked for the best way to prepare their food easier. making food process need a lot of time; thus people had to spend a lot of their time to prepare. their food. Today, traditional making foods evolves to modern techniques which descries time to making food. preparing food effects on people life is a controversial issue which has its own advantage and disadvantage therefore we should consider It from different aspects.
Nowadays, with the advent of freezers and refrigerators, people are able to keep their foods for a long time; in addition to, they don’t need to spend time to get their requirement foods every day. utilizing of new technologies helps people to save more money and foods remain fresh more than before; moreover, inventing of microwave helps people to spend less time to cook their food and they can use their time in another ways which need more time.
another advantage of using of new modern is conservators and another ways that use to keep foods more fresh; as point in this case we can mention to smoking and half-baked foods and using artificial additions can help us to keep food for more times and preserve them of corrupting.
on the other hand, we found that using new methods are economic ways for people to do not waste their time and money in making foods. View of the fact that they have disadvantages which threat people life. Having obesity, blood pleasure, cancers are example of illnesses which lead to using new methods of conserving foods. for instant, using microwave in cooking food in the minimum time causes that food become rare cooked; moreover, many part of food be unripe. this matter causes to germs and bacteria gather in this places as a result people become sick.
to sum up, using modern new modern to preparing food me be economical way in a first look and people able to do more work in a less time but in the long time they can causes to new problems like disease that make people spend their time and money for curing that it can be a enormous problem
