24-12-2014, 11:13 PM
Hi
Please, look at to my essay
I am weak in writing task 2, Please, help me with your goood adivces.
Next my test is near.
TPO5
Please, look at to my essay
I am weak in writing task 2, Please, help me with your goood adivces.
Next my test is near.
TPO5
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At first glance, it extremely difficult to define, due to this point is conditional for people, who has deferent condition. People learn life in world therefore, they more capable for use from their life and enjoy from it. From my vantage point, they want provide intresting lifestyle, hence doing things they like to do. My arguments for this point are listed as follow.
At an early stage, today people have more ability and afford for doing likely work. They have enough income because world is better place for work than past. Therefore, they can save money, owing to they have enough afford to obviate their needs then dedicate save money for another enjoyable work in during their life such as travel. Too, they can invest their save money, it's increase their afford for spending money, because they gain more meney, when they invest. In addition to, people use from higher technology facilities than past. Work in this condition is very easy and enjoyable, because work become easy therefore, they have enough energy after work for doing enjoyable work. It is means more free time. So, they can benefit from this facilities for recognize with new enjoyable work. Thecnology wide choice for people. So, for example, I work in oil company my income is enough. I not nly save money but also I have three off days in during week. Its means I can going to travel or hill walking. While, my father worked in farm. He always work, but cannot obvite our elementary needs, therefore we never thinked to our enjoyable needs.
Another my argument is that, nowadays people can follow their plan. Todays, world is very order and reliable than past. Therefore, they can match their plan with society. This order system help to them finishing work ontime. Too, world is higher security than past. Hence, they can spending time in public places, because sometimes for doing likely work should going to public places for example watching to football match. In addition to, people have better comunication, when use from coherent plan. They have not unsuitable expect from their time. When they going to dance clube, they expecte exiting place. If they have not good comunication cannot endure themselves in near together. This condition cause they more recognize with new culture and costum. Therefore, they have variety choice for spending time.
To put everything in a nutshell, in spite of the undeniable fact today people doing thing, which they like do, because they have deferent condition for life such as they have more ability and afford and they can follow their plan. I say one thing, today people always take risk, bcause they want enjoy from their life.
At first glance, it extremely difficult to define, due to this point is conditional for people, who has deferent condition. People learn life in world therefore, they more capable for use from their life and enjoy from it. From my vantage point, they want provide intresting lifestyle, hence doing things they like to do. My arguments for this point are listed as follow.
At an early stage, today people have more ability and afford for doing likely work. They have enough income because world is better place for work than past. Therefore, they can save money, owing to they have enough afford to obviate their needs then dedicate save money for another enjoyable work in during their life such as travel. Too, they can invest their save money, it's increase their afford for spending money, because they gain more meney, when they invest. In addition to, people use from higher technology facilities than past. Work in this condition is very easy and enjoyable, because work become easy therefore, they have enough energy after work for doing enjoyable work. It is means more free time. So, they can benefit from this facilities for recognize with new enjoyable work. Thecnology wide choice for people. So, for example, I work in oil company my income is enough. I not nly save money but also I have three off days in during week. Its means I can going to travel or hill walking. While, my father worked in farm. He always work, but cannot obvite our elementary needs, therefore we never thinked to our enjoyable needs.
Another my argument is that, nowadays people can follow their plan. Todays, world is very order and reliable than past. Therefore, they can match their plan with society. This order system help to them finishing work ontime. Too, world is higher security than past. Hence, they can spending time in public places, because sometimes for doing likely work should going to public places for example watching to football match. In addition to, people have better comunication, when use from coherent plan. They have not unsuitable expect from their time. When they going to dance clube, they expecte exiting place. If they have not good comunication cannot endure themselves in near together. This condition cause they more recognize with new culture and costum. Therefore, they have variety choice for spending time.
To put everything in a nutshell, in spite of the undeniable fact today people doing thing, which they like do, because they have deferent condition for life such as they have more ability and afford and they can follow their plan. I say one thing, today people always take risk, bcause they want enjoy from their life.