08-02-2013, 02:11 PM
سلام دوستان.من نمونه رایتینگی رو در اینجا قرار میدم و سپاسگزار خواهم بود اگر نظرتون رو بفرمایید.در ضمن اولین نمونه ای هم هست که نوشتم.با تشکر.
If you could change one important thing about you hometown ,what would you change?use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
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If I have the opportunity to change an important thing in my hometown,definitely it will be a substantial change in city transportation system.Among many necessary needs in this case,I can mention to three more important ones
ubway system,more superhighways and the last but not least,allocating more buses and buss stations in remote areas of the city.
After waiting for too much,we must take a serious decision about establishing a subway system for a town with over one million people inhabit in. Main streets of my city,were built around one-hundred year ago and they cannot accept today's population of city.Transportation of travelers from one place to another,both in central parts of the city,is too much slow.People in streets specially have a great deal of trouble around 8:00 AM and 6:00 PM,two most overcrowded times.All this,result in deep need of subway system through which people including students, office workers and rest of wide variety of other working persons can go to their schools,universities and works with less trouble both for themselves and others.
Absence of more superhighways also is crucially a great lack which can be seen and felt with everyone who travels to my city;and of the greatest importance,to the citizens.This shortage is spontaneously emphasized during up-to-several-days vacations,when there is a great volume of travels from all over the country towards my city.Most of these times,I can see dissatisfied travelers who look for convenient superhighways which is essential for fast transportations throughout city,specially when one wants to visit several far-away places in a short time.It is obviously that citizens have doubled problems in such overcrowded days.All things considered, I think that more superhighways are vital for my city without any doubt.
It can be clearly observed that citizens specially those who don't own cars,have substantial problems when they need to go to remote areas of the city.In my point of view,his problem can solve by allocating more buses and buss stations in such areas.Though one might think that this is waste of money and such facilities should allocate to central and near-central parts of the city,I think that such an allocation can provide citizen's security and in greater scale of time,this can result to distribute population in these areas as well as central parts.
All in all,establishing the first subway system together with building more superhighways and assigning buses and buss stations in remote parts,are three most important solutions I've planned to improve transportation system of my city.I believe these solutions can be a great change in the current situation of the city where I live in.
424 کلمه.
If you could change one important thing about you hometown ,what would you change?use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
.
If I have the opportunity to change an important thing in my hometown,definitely it will be a substantial change in city transportation system.Among many necessary needs in this case,I can mention to three more important ones
ubway system,more superhighways and the last but not least,allocating more buses and buss stations in remote areas of the city.After waiting for too much,we must take a serious decision about establishing a subway system for a town with over one million people inhabit in. Main streets of my city,were built around one-hundred year ago and they cannot accept today's population of city.Transportation of travelers from one place to another,both in central parts of the city,is too much slow.People in streets specially have a great deal of trouble around 8:00 AM and 6:00 PM,two most overcrowded times.All this,result in deep need of subway system through which people including students, office workers and rest of wide variety of other working persons can go to their schools,universities and works with less trouble both for themselves and others.
Absence of more superhighways also is crucially a great lack which can be seen and felt with everyone who travels to my city;and of the greatest importance,to the citizens.This shortage is spontaneously emphasized during up-to-several-days vacations,when there is a great volume of travels from all over the country towards my city.Most of these times,I can see dissatisfied travelers who look for convenient superhighways which is essential for fast transportations throughout city,specially when one wants to visit several far-away places in a short time.It is obviously that citizens have doubled problems in such overcrowded days.All things considered, I think that more superhighways are vital for my city without any doubt.
It can be clearly observed that citizens specially those who don't own cars,have substantial problems when they need to go to remote areas of the city.In my point of view,his problem can solve by allocating more buses and buss stations in such areas.Though one might think that this is waste of money and such facilities should allocate to central and near-central parts of the city,I think that such an allocation can provide citizen's security and in greater scale of time,this can result to distribute population in these areas as well as central parts.
All in all,establishing the first subway system together with building more superhighways and assigning buses and buss stations in remote parts,are three most important solutions I've planned to improve transportation system of my city.I believe these solutions can be a great change in the current situation of the city where I live in.
424 کلمه.
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