شما متن تون خیلی خوبه. به نظر می رسه سطح زبانتون خیلی بالاست. من به شخصه خیلی جاهاش رو اصلاً متوجه نشدم، از بس که لغاتش ناآشنا بود. بنابراین خیلی هم نمی تونم نقد کنم... یه نکته اینکه به جای himself/herself فکر می کنم themselves بتونید به کار ببرید. در واقع هر جا جنسیت نامعلوم باشه می شه از ضمیر سوم شخص جمع استفاده کرد. البته اگر اشتباه می کنم دوستان اصلاح کنند.
چند مورد اشتباه گرامری هم از نظ من داشتید، البته در همه موارد مطمئن نیستم حق با من باشه! با قرمز مشخص کردم.
چند مورد اشتباه گرامری هم از نظ من داشتید، البته در همه موارد مطمئن نیستم حق با من باشه! با قرمز مشخص کردم.
(18-08-2012, 03:32 AM)shokooh نوشته:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Decision-making especially the important one is a very prevalent phenomenon each one of us undergoes throughout our life.
To my understanding, I am of the standpoint conceded every person has the personal rights to make his own destiny, in some cases he cannot makes (make) underlying decisions alone especially those cases which have effects on other individuals. There appear to be numerous reasons why I hold on, and I would explicate solely a few primary ones, as follows.
To begin with, for children who cannot recognize the bad from the good, it is of vital significance that they are not able to make pivotal decisions themselves. To shed more light on the issue, the children do not have so much experience in compared with (compared to) their parents that they cannot make the authentic decision. As a case in point, which school is better for children to attend? Which road of life will they go? More important is with whom friends they have relationships? There is no shadow of doubt that their friends have drastic impression on children owing to the fact that they spend most of the time with them in school or even after school’s time and children have inclination to imitate the behaviors and actions of their friends. Moreover, as it is known to all, children and teenagers are at the age when they are so stubborn and presumptuous; hence, the parents do coerce them to abide by some decisions they make. Further, it is expected of parents to inform children how to realize the bad from the good.
On the other hand, for the young they are mature enough that they are able to make decision about their personal matters, but they also take advice from the elderly. To put it more simply, for any young person there lie a plethora of decisions such as, choosing a major in university, selection of a life partner, choosing a career and so forth they should make throughout his/her life and it is noteworthy that no one can understand the taste and likings of a person better than himself. Furthermore, it is quite fruitful to hear the opinions of well-wishers and the experienced respecting the deciding issues. However, the individual himself/herself should take the final decision after carefully weighting all options in order of importance and receiving consultation, like marital counseling from experts. Thus, not only does it give the youth self-confidence, but they can gradually learn how to put on their own feet and get along well with difficulties they maybe (may) encounter in their lives.
In the eventual place, decision making about something is quite different when it comes to taking decision involving political, national, international, business and environmental issues. It is taken for granted that the decision to be made in these cases has desperate ramifications on quite a lot of people than that of the personal issues owing to the fact that maybe the consequences of theses decision have influence on the lives and fates of a myriad of individuals of society. As regards these principal issues, one can never make decision alone; rather, the potpourri of responsible persons by having brainstorming session of all involved persons and also using expert knowledge of consultants should make final decision. The suggestions provided by the consultants can be expected to be suitable, since most of them are either by scientific methods or based on a reliable statistical data of past.
To put the main points in a nutshell, taking all of the aforementioned discussions, I in person cleave to the conviction that one can take the liberty by himself/ herself about decisions when it comes to personal issues, yet when it involves decisions beyond one person, one cannot make decision alone.
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