08-07-2012, 04:57 PM
(08-07-2012, 03:26 PM)pegah نوشته:1- روی املای لغات بیشتر باید کار کنید.Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways,or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation(buses,trains,subways)?Why?Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Nowadays,there are two important issues in the field of transportation. First,the issue of public transportation and second,improving highways and roads.Both of them are important to comfort transportation.But in my opinion the existence of a modern transportation system is more necessary than the other one.There are many reasons,supporting this idea.
First, the most percentage of population is allocated to middle_class people in many societies. Simple workers and non well educated people with low salaries form this social group.They might not have their own cars or they might prefer to use public transportation vehicles to attend their works,maybe because they are cheaper.Thus governments are supposed to provide a suitable transportation system to carry this category of people.
Second,the existence of a modern and proper transportation system helps to solve some of important problems like air pollution and traffic jam. While a proper public transportation and enough buses and subway stations are accessible ,fewer people intend to use their own cars and drive for long hours. In addition they wouldn't be concerned about traffic tickets and parking spaces.
In my opinion governments ought to spend more funds on improving public transportation,because they are supposed to fulfill the expectations of the people who form the biggest section of the population"middle_class people". In addition they can reduce the air pollution and the effects of it such as several diseases which are really expensive to solve(CURE). Improving roads and highways would be beneficial too, but it's not as "necessary as improving public transportation.
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