07-07-2012, 12:45 AM
In general people are living longer now.Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.Use spicific reasons and details to develope your essay.My friend, for becoming an expert in writing – any foreign language you say- you need to find a way to interest yourself to do so. Don’t get bewildered with mixing viewpoints. Of course getting instructions from people/ sources would help, but, that’s you who’d decide to choose the way to learn. I am writing some of my own, resembling to what you’ve pointed ( & not an essay) … you might find them worthy to look up to. If this helps, plz let me know to carry on.. in small doses at the beginning.(For right formats for an essay, more organized instructions need to be followed from official writing sources).
In the past many people died as a result of predicaments such as inflectious deseases or famines. Centuries ago, people found it hard to protect themselves from difficulties they faced in their societies. Lack of social facilities made it hard for them to deal with diseases and calamities. At the time many families intended to have many childrens but the high number of deaths didn't let the population grow. To resolve some of these difficulties, women used to give birth to more children. This way they felt that it could compensate the loss they had in disasters. But reverse,nowadays we frequently encounter couples who don't intend to give a birth to even a child.despite,the world's population is increasing conspicuously.But what is the reason of this growth?That's clear,these days people live longer than the past.In other words, the nomber of deaths has got fewer than the nomber of births.There are many reasons responding the cause of this phenomenon.These days’ people live in higher standard situations. Couples usually care more about their own relationships rather than having babies and growing the population of their families. Also, other powerful aspects for living longer are definitely the facilities right now. A life-long dream -for having more civilized-modern living styles- has almost become a tradition for every individual these days. Every body seeks for more facilities invented. Well-paid careers, extravagant houses, powerful situation(s) in works, meaningful relationships, and the most important: healthy situations and cares. Looking at competitive insurance ads in markets, every person can easily find out that people have been impelled to care more about their health’s situations in current societies.
The most important change making the lifetime longer is medicin developement.As you know medicin has had conspicuous developments during the past years.For erxample several new medicins and drugs,curing deseases,are accessible.In addition many people can get vaccines,preventing them to get some illnesses which were deadly once.Many surgoun robots and other facilities help doctors to save suffere's lives and new cures for several sicknesses are descovered daily.therefore,sick people can be cured with new methods and early death won't be their fate.
Another important reason that helped people to live longer and healthier is agricultural developement.In the past,agriculture was not so advanced as today's.Droughts or pests destroyed the crops.Cponcequently food supplies decreased and many people starved.furthermore at the time ditchs and other advantagous builts,supplying the water needed for irrigation were few and inadvanced.But now scientist are even able to fertilize clouds and force them to rain.Thus,we can make sure that the most important living reqisites are provided.And people nolonger lose their lives as aresult of lacking these.
In the past despite the high nomber of births,the population was balanced,because many young people or children died.Lacking food supplies and suitable cures for deseases were the resons of their deaths.thesedays despite fewer births,the world population is growing.Because the nomber of deaths is fewer than the past and people live for longer.In my opinion humankind owes this to the developement of sciences such as agricuture science and medicine science.Ofcoures there are many problems which still are not solved.But we can be hopeful that scientist will find remedies to solve them and definitely people's lifetime will be much longer in the future.
In the past many people died as a result of predicaments such as inflectious deseases or famines. Centuries ago, people found it hard to protect themselves from difficulties they faced in their societies. Lack of social facilities made it hard for them to deal with diseases and calamities. At the time many families intended to have many childrens but the high number of deaths didn't let the population grow. To resolve some of these difficulties, women used to give birth to more children. This way they felt that it could compensate the loss they had in disasters. But reverse,nowadays we frequently encounter couples who don't intend to give a birth to even a child.despite,the world's population is increasing conspicuously.But what is the reason of this growth?That's clear,these days people live longer than the past.In other words, the nomber of deaths has got fewer than the nomber of births.There are many reasons responding the cause of this phenomenon.These days’ people live in higher standard situations. Couples usually care more about their own relationships rather than having babies and growing the population of their families. Also, other powerful aspects for living longer are definitely the facilities right now. A life-long dream -for having more civilized-modern living styles- has almost become a tradition for every individual these days. Every body seeks for more facilities invented. Well-paid careers, extravagant houses, powerful situation(s) in works, meaningful relationships, and the most important: healthy situations and cares. Looking at competitive insurance ads in markets, every person can easily find out that people have been impelled to care more about their health’s situations in current societies.
The most important change making the lifetime longer is medicin developement.As you know medicin has had conspicuous developments during the past years.For erxample several new medicins and drugs,curing deseases,are accessible.In addition many people can get vaccines,preventing them to get some illnesses which were deadly once.Many surgoun robots and other facilities help doctors to save suffere's lives and new cures for several sicknesses are descovered daily.therefore,sick people can be cured with new methods and early death won't be their fate.
Another important reason that helped people to live longer and healthier is agricultural developement.In the past,agriculture was not so advanced as today's.Droughts or pests destroyed the crops.Cponcequently food supplies decreased and many people starved.furthermore at the time ditchs and other advantagous builts,supplying the water needed for irrigation were few and inadvanced.But now scientist are even able to fertilize clouds and force them to rain.Thus,we can make sure that the most important living reqisites are provided.And people nolonger lose their lives as aresult of lacking these.
In the past despite the high nomber of births,the population was balanced,because many young people or children died.Lacking food supplies and suitable cures for deseases were the resons of their deaths.thesedays despite fewer births,the world population is growing.Because the nomber of deaths is fewer than the past and people live for longer.In my opinion humankind owes this to the developement of sciences such as agricuture science and medicine science.Ofcoures there are many problems which still are not solved.But we can be hopeful that scientist will find remedies to solve them and definitely people's lifetime will be much longer in the future.
