01-08-2016, 01:44 PM
با سلام خدمت دوستان عزیز
من شهرستان هستم و دسترسی به کسی ندارم که تو این زمینه کمکم کنه.
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In today’s world, no one can ever cast a shadow of doubt on the vital role of the knowledge in the quality of our lives. Universities are one of the most important references of the learning science, literature, linguistic, art and many other fields. Some people think it is essential and necessary for them to have broad and extensive knowledge. These people, however, are wrong at least when it comes to advantages and benefits that being expertize in one specific subject bring to them. In my opinion, todays’ world needs to people who are expert in his or her major. Experts have opportunity to get high level job and can help in developing edges of knowledge. Therefore, I believe that it is better to specialize in specific subject in order to achieve these valuable purposes
One of the most important thing to realize is that job’s opportunity is for people who are expert in a field. Nowadays, industrials, companies and offices need to people who have creativity and ability to solve complex problems. In my point of view, the necessary condition for being creative is being expert. All works have especial purposes, so those need special workers. For instance, in my country, Iran, students in bachelor degree just take general courses. But those courses don’t have any function on industry. As a result, none of the bachelor students have opportunity to get job. Because of that some intelligent students go on to study master degree. At master degree they learn special courses and familiar with special software that give them ability to work in special field. Therefore, I am going to study master degree to increase my chance to get better job
من شهرستان هستم و دسترسی به کسی ندارم که تو این زمینه کمکم کنه.
خیلی ممنون میشم ازتون، لطف کنین این writing رو بررسی کنید و ایراداتم رو بهم بگید.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------In today’s world, no one can ever cast a shadow of doubt on the vital role of the knowledge in the quality of our lives. Universities are one of the most important references of the learning science, literature, linguistic, art and many other fields. Some people think it is essential and necessary for them to have broad and extensive knowledge. These people, however, are wrong at least when it comes to advantages and benefits that being expertize in one specific subject bring to them. In my opinion, todays’ world needs to people who are expert in his or her major. Experts have opportunity to get high level job and can help in developing edges of knowledge. Therefore, I believe that it is better to specialize in specific subject in order to achieve these valuable purposes
One of the most important thing to realize is that job’s opportunity is for people who are expert in a field. Nowadays, industrials, companies and offices need to people who have creativity and ability to solve complex problems. In my point of view, the necessary condition for being creative is being expert. All works have especial purposes, so those need special workers. For instance, in my country, Iran, students in bachelor degree just take general courses. But those courses don’t have any function on industry. As a result, none of the bachelor students have opportunity to get job. Because of that some intelligent students go on to study master degree. At master degree they learn special courses and familiar with special software that give them ability to work in special field. Therefore, I am going to study master degree to increase my chance to get better job
Another important reason is developing knowledge. Nowadays, world needs individuals who can develop and modify knowledge in order to create better life for all. People who have just broad knowledge can’t create major changes in any fields. In recent century, people who spent their life on one specific subject changed the path of our life. They moved edge of knowledge and had ability to educate many other people. It seems to me, experts will change the future as well as experts changed it at the past
Taking everything into consideration, one can easily conclude that because of importance of increasing chance of taking job for individual and developing edge of knowledge for society, it is better to specialize in one specific subject
