02-03-2016, 10:01 PM
(02-03-2016, 07:37 PM)arc نوشته: ممنون از وقتی که گذاشتین، من سعی کردم یه کم تغییر بدم که به جزئیات نزدیک تر بشه اما زیاد موفق نبودم، مثلا تو کارای پژوهشی و زمینه معماری پایدار توانایی و اطلاعات دارم ولی فعلا مقاله ی رسمی که جایی ثبت شده باشه ننوشتم و همه ش پژوهش دانشگاهی بوده، نمی دونم این مطلبو چه طوری بیارم تو ریکام، ممنون می شم اگه یه کم در این مورد هم راهنمایی کنید
To whom it may concern
I am writing to you in support of Miss. XxX and her desire to pursue Turkey Scholarships the Architecture program. Though many students ask me to make this request on their behalf, I only recommend students whom I feel are well-suited for the program of their choice.She took Fundamentals of Architectural Design and Technical Design. She was one of my best students, in my Technical Design course, and she got a high score which was a reflection of her aptitude. She was very good at technical aspects of architecture and has a good knowledge in this area. I found her an intelligent person and she has a deep understanding of the theoretical aspects of the subject and also has the ability to transfer them to practice. Furthermore she is very creative and has a good problem solving skills. One thing I really admire about XxX is that, she is assiduous in any activity she does, in order to obtain her preferred outcome. Therefore, I recommend her strongly for graduate study. I can assure you that she will surely be able to pass your M.Sc. program successfully due to her willingness and abilities. Please don’t hesitate to contact me for more information about the applicant.
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