رفع اشکال و تقویت Writing زبان انگلیسی

To develop our writing skills, we should pay attention to three aspects/consider three aspects.
The most important one is your vocabulary knowledge. In developing writing, instead of merely memorizing a new word, we'd better learn the other related words/word families too). For instance, knowing the new noun 'crime' is not enough, you should also learn the related adjective 'criminal', the adverb '----',..
The second item is grammar. Having an extensive vocabulary knowledge is useless, if you don't know the right structure/ if you can't make grammatically correct sentences/if you don't know how to put words together/if you don't know how to make a correct sentence. Therefore, grammar is as important as vocabulary.
Improving your grammatical and vocabulary knowledge is essential. There are some other short suggestions:
1-Memorizing some basic sentences like as ( Sorry I didn't understand what you mean)
2-Recognizing sentences. For example ‘’ they did not go out yesterday.’’ (again, I couldn't catch you)
3- Studying other words with the same root when you are learning a new word.

سلام دوست گرامی
رایتینگ شما و دامنه لغاتتون خیلی خوبه، فقط یک سری بی دقتی هایی در Punctuation و Paragraph outline و خیلی کم word choice دارید. خیلی جاهایی که در نوشته های شما حذف شده و یا تغییر کرده شاید غلط هم نبوده باشه، ولی به این دلیل حذف شده که میتونسته بهتر و خلاصه تر از این هم بیان بشه....[img]images/smilies/smile.gif[/img] از دید من:

To start the/my story, first I have to tell/ give some important elements/information. Ten years ago, Illinois, an embezzlement case, was brought to the court, and the judge began to consider all the related documents on the case. In the end (at the end), the jury announced the final vote (or returned a guilty verdict). The file was related to a manager of a governmental agency who had artfully misappropriated twenty million dollars without leaving a single evidence (or trace).(Or The file was related to a governmental manager who had misappropriated twenty million dollars with such an artfulness/adroitness that no one would have suspected.)
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However, a proverb says, "Too has gained the upper hand" (??? I know nothing about this idiom). The manager was a person with a charming face and courteous behavior, but these characteristics were not enough to deceive an observant and professional public prosecutor. After a few-months long legislative process, the manger was found guilty and sentenced to ten years in prison. After so many tough days in prison, the manager was released while he was harboring a deep grudge against the prosecutor. Although the manager was old, he felt so young with a sense of revenge, which finally prompted him to devise a murder plan. One rainy night, he picked up his umbrella and went to a gun shop. At the gun shop, He requested for a 45-caliber pistol, and arms dealer offered to him.
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The day after that rainy night, he woke up early to review the murder plot and prepare himself. He took his pistol and went to the park that prosecutor usually came there for jugging, and hid himself in the bushes waiting for the right moment. Eventually, the prosecutor appeared under the usual hour. The embezzler manager did not hesitate a moment to shoot him right in the heart.

این یک سوال گرامری هست و نیازی به حفظ نیست
وقتی دو فعل اصلی رو بخوایم توی یه جمله بیاریم فعل دوم به صورت مصدر یا ing فرم می آید
فعل های خاصی در زبان انگلیسی هستند که باید بعد اونها مصدر آورد مثل agree
فعل هایی هم هستند که فقط ing فرم را بعد از خود می پذیرند مثل admit
و برای بقیه ی افعال اکثرا می توان هم شکل ing دار و هم مصدر را به کار برد
نیازی به حفظ این افعال هم نیست شما در طول زمان اینها رو یاد میگیرید
مصدر در زبان انگلیسی به صورت ( فعل اصلی + to ) ساخته میشه
مثل to meet, to speak و ....
سه فعل خاص در زبان انگلیسی هستند که بعد از آنان باید مصدر را بدون to آورد که عبارتند از help , make , let
مثل let her sleep
که sleep در آن بدون to آمده است
اینها نکات ساده ی گرامری زبان انگلیسی هستند که به مرور آن ها را یاد می گیرید
مثلن اگر بخوایم فعل را در حالت امری به کار ببریم بایدر آن را به صورت مصدز بدون to بیاوریم
مثل go to bed