رفع اشکال و تقویت Writing زبان انگلیسی

بستگی به عنوان ایمیل قبلی داره (اگر فرض کنیم بهش رسیده، دیده و باز نکرده). باید چیزی باشه که توجه رو جلب کنه. به عنوان مثال:
Graduate student interested in mutual collaberation in bone tissue engineering
عنوانی رو انتخاب کنید که در نگاه اول بفهمه برای چی فرستادید و بازش کنه. اسم فرستنده هم اسم مشخصی باشه، این رو به این دلیل می گم که دوستانی داشتم که این اشتباه رو کردن. کسی ایمیل ناشناس از goldstar/rose... باز نمی کنه.

Subjects such as art, music and drama should be a part of every child s basic education.
   Indeed learning and education feed the brain, our physics need exercise and suitable nutrition. art, music and drama is akind of food for soul. I totally believe children should learn music, art and drama as a basic education
   Psychologically learning variety of arts such as music helps to empower imagination. Besides by learning of those children learn how to express them and how to show their emotions. They have been thought it is possible to demonstrate their emotion by drawing a picture or playing a musical instrument.
   Being familiar with themselves, their culture and their world is another significant benefit of learning art for children. The children can know more about similarities and differences between various cultures. In fact every culture has different music, different art.
   Moreover teaching art helps children to relax their body and their soul. However brilliant relaxation helps them to concentrate more on others to learn.
   In summary learning some arts such as music, art and etc is one of the basic subject needs of our soul. We should have a special mention to this subject for future of our children. While we must not forget; it should be optional for our children till by a correct choose they can find their ability in special kind of art.

Subjects such as art, music and drama should be a part of every child s basic education.
Although learning feeds the brain, our physics body needs exercise and suitable nutrition. Art, music and drama is a kind of food for the soul. I totally believe children should learn music, art and drama as a form of basic education.
Psychologically learning a variety of arts such as music helps to empower imagination. Besides On the other hand, by learning such subjects of those children learn how to express themselves and how to show their emotions. They have been thought taught it is possible to demonstrate their emotion by drawing a picture or playing a musical instrument.
Being familiar with themselves, their culture and their world is another significant benefit of learning art for children. The children can know more about similarities and differences between various cultures. In fact every culture has different music, different art.
Moreover, teaching art helps children to relax their body and their soul. However, brilliant relaxation helps them to concentrate more on others to learn.
In summary, learning some arts such as music, art (drawing) and etc is one of the basic subject needs of our soul. We should have a special mention to this subject for future of our children. While we must not forget; that it should be optional for our children till by a correct choose they can to find their ability in a special kind of art of their choice.

In January 2012 the article with code of felan was sent to the journal that in advance of it I was offered a free of charge publish in the journal which due to the condition of the journal that is a new and developing, I thought and still think this journal is a perfect place for the article to be published. The article was sent due to the offer but after seven months I have been told to pay the cost that is not possible for the author in Iran to pay because of the sanctions against banks of the country.
I wonder if it may be possible for you to publish the article free of charge.

دوست گرامی
1- جملاتتان بسیار طولانی و بعضا مبهم است و ممکن است خواننده را کاملا گیج کند. بهتر است منظورتان را دقیق تر و مختصر تر بنویسید.
2- جملاتتات به شیوه ای فارسی گونه بیان شده و بهتر است به معادل های انگلیسی آن رجوع کنید.

پیشنهاد میکنم ابتدا این تاپیک را مطالعه کنید و سپس متن را بازنویسی کنید.