(23-12-2011, 07:23 PM)saeed_oroomy نوشته: سلام دوست عزیز..حضورتون رو در سایت تبریک میگم...توصیه نامه شما چندین ایراد داره...نمره رو 2 باز ذکر کردید که به این موضوع نیاز نبوده...2-یه مقدار غلط گرامری و نوشتاری داره...3-شما از جملات کوتاه زیادی استفاده کردید....4-توصیه میکنم چندین نمونه رکمند که تو سایت هست رو نگاه کنید و تو وب هم دنبال نمونه های بیشتری باشید...5-سعی کنید نامه شما طولانی تر از اینی باشه که نوشتید...

(23-12-2011, 10:10 PM)m0h3n نوشته: من متوجه نشدم !! شما دارید توصیه نامه واسه خودتون می نویسید !!!!

بهرحال متن این توصیه نامه مناسب نیست و دارای اشکالات بسیاری هست و شیوه نوشتار نشون میده که این دست خط مربوط به استاد نیست. (اگر هم دستخط استاد هست که ...)

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(23-12-2011, 07:15 PM)parsley نوشته:

To whom it may concern:
I know X for two years as his teacher.
I recommend him to you. I taught him a course: the lab of computer architecture. He got a perfect mark in it: a full 20/20! I think this shows his perfect performance sufficiently and it is not necessary to give more comments about that. In addition, he was well organized during this practical course – that is so important about these types of courses. These sorts of courses are based on detecting, analyzing and then solving the issues and he did it well as an innovative student. Another aspect of his personality that I want to mention is his interest in teamwork. It’s because the practical courses are generally related to teamwork activities and he could afford it very well along with his group members to solve the problems perfectly. We had a time pressure in each class session to complete a whole part of the course and he did it suitably too. Finally, I should point to his great mark again that put him at the top of the class.
Herby, I want to strongly recommend him as a perfect student based on my experiences at the academic atmosphere. Please don’t hesitate to contact me , if you need more information about him.
Sincerely

For more information, contact to:

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(26-12-2011, 11:21 PM)parsley نوشته:

To whom it may concern
i am wrting this letter as a recommendation letter to suggest MRr. XXX as a prospective student for your program

I know X for two years as his teacher

X asked me to write a recommendation letter for him, because we had a course together: the lab of computer architecture. He got a perfect mark in it: a full 20/20! I think this shows his perfect performance clearly. Beyond his excellent score, he has some other outstanding qualities that qualify him for your program. He was so organized during this practical course – that is so important about these types of courses. These sorts of courses are based on detecting, analyzing and then solving the issues and he did it well as an innovative and open mind student. Another aspect of his personality is his interest in teamwork. The course was generally related to teamwork activities and he could afford it very well to get along with his group members very well to solve the problems perfectly. We had a time pressure in each class session to complete a whole part of the course and he did it suitably too. Finally his great mark distinguish him in the class.

Based on my knowledge about him and his personality, i strongly recommend him to your program as he has sufficient potential to do as a meritorious student at the MSc programs.
Please don’t hesitate to contact me later, if you need more information about him

Sincerely

moshakhasat va emaile ostad

این دفه به مراتب بهتر شده...ولی هنوز با ریکام استاندارد فاصله داره...از صفات شخصی بیشتر بنویسید...از خود استاد بنویسید...دوست عزیز شما رو ریکام رو باید طوری بنویسید که خواننده احساس کنه این دانشجو واقعا با دیگران فرق داره...همه که تو ریکامشون مینویسین این دانشجو خوبه...اله هستش...بلههه هستش....باید قوی تر باشه...تو این اینک دوستمون پژمان فایلی رو آپلود کرده..حتما نگاه کنید