10-10-2015, 07:05 PM
(12-11-2014, 10:57 PM)ebrahimsangsefi نوشته:با سلام
میشه یه نگاه به رایتینگ من بندازید و ایراداتم رو بهم بگین.
Agree or disagree? Making sure that people such as the manager or your supervisor know your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed. Otherwise you cannot achieve anything.
There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages associated with illustrating strength and accomplishments in a work. Although there are some people who may think that this action does not work, I firmly believe that showing what you know in the your work can not only illustrate your ability to handle the job but also help you to find your faults and misgivings as soon as possible. Moreover, especially in a group work it is hard for the manager or supervisor to identify each person’s proficiency.
Without any doubt, the most important reason to showcase your ability in the work is to illustrate the person’s your ability to handle some aspect of the duty. It is a competitive world and I personally believe that, only those people make a good progress in their work that their/whose supervisors know their strength. For example I can refer to my friend. He and me I (formal writing uses I) were graduated at the same time and from the same university. We choose (past of choose) to work in the same company. After a year he was promoted to a higher position in the company, even though/whereas (when meaning "in contrast" it is one word not two words) I was better than him. His key to success was to depict show what he knows. This attitude hads a positive detrimental effect on his progress.
Let us to look at the issue from a different angle. I believe that trying to show your ability expedites your progress as well. Please imagine a situation in which a person shows his wrong gives incorrect knowledge to his supervisor. It is more likely that he can find his mistake immediately and will not repeat that in on other occasions. On the other hand, we must take this in our keep in mind that I do not mention mean those people who try to pretend and mislead their managers. We have to consider that time is money and as soon we correct our mistakes we will progress as well.
For the most part, in a group work it is really hard for the manager to find out who works better in the group. I believe that we live in an era that is best known well-known as a dog eat dog world. Sometimes it is a usual event that at the end of a work job all people are treated the same, while everyone knows that there are some people that work harder and better. The only way to avoid destroying your work future is to make your buss to know your strength and abilities. I think believe God helps those who help themselves.
Unquestionably, in my view it is better for people to make help their boss know their abilities. In this way they would be able to kill two birds with one stone. They both show their abilities and correct their mistakes.
job و work با وجود شباهت تفاوتهاي معنايي و كاربردي دارند، حتما موقع استفاده دقت كنيد كه جاي هم ننويسيد و هر كدوم رو به شيوه دستوري خودش استفاده كنيد.
جهت استفاده صحيح از I/me يا he/him جمله رو براي خودتون جداگانه بنويسيد. به عنوان مثال بخش دوم he and I graduated به شكل زير مي شود:
I graduated
Me graduated
همون طور كه مشخص در اينجا اولي درست بوده و قابل استفاده هست.
كاربرد صحيح كلمه خيلي مهم هست. depict يعني به تصوير كشاندن براي همين اينجا خيلي قابل استفاده نيست. اگر درباره معني هم شك داريد اصلا استفاده نكنيد مثلا از detrimental استفاده كرديد. اين كلمه يعني tending to cause harm (مخرب بودن) ولي شما به شكل مثبت ازش استفاده كرديد.
(24-12-2014, 11:13 PM)Kobani نوشته:اين متن بخصوص پاراگراف اول خيلي قابل فهم نبود و در نبود عنوان موضوع با خواندنش نتونستم متوجه بشم قرار درباره چي صحبت كنيد. به همين دليل هم نتونستم كاملا تصحيحش كنم و موارد كلي رو علامت زدم. مثالها كمك كردن اما شيوه نگارش تسلط كافي به موضوع نداره، سعي كنيد بيشتر موقع نوشتن انگليسي همه چي حتي عناوين رو هم به انگليسي در ذهنتون بياوريد تا با ترجمه همزمان سبب اشتباه و عدم فهم مطلب نشه. براي تمرين روزمره حتي مي تونيد يه دفتر خاطرات ساده تهيه كنيد كه اگر با برنامه ورد بنويسيد سرعت نوشتنتون هم مي ره بالا.Hi
Please, look at to my essay
I am weak in writing task 2, Please, help me with your goood adivces.
Next my test is near.
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due to this point is being conditional for people, who has have deferent (maybe you meant different) conditions, at first glance, it is extremely difficult to define. People learn life in world therefore, they more capable for use from their life and enjoy from it. From my vantage point, they want provide intresting lifestyle, hence doing things they like to do. My arguments for this point are listed as follow.
At an early stage, today people have more ability and afford for doing likely work. They have enough income because the world is a better place for work than in the past. Therefore, they can save money, owing to they have enough to afford to obviate their needs then dedicate save money for another enjoyable work in during their life such as travel. Too Also, they can invest their save money savings, it's which increases their afford for spending money, because they gain more meney, when they invest. In addition to, people use from higher greater technology facilities than the past. Work in this condition is very easy and enjoyable, because work become easy therefore, It is means more free time and they have enough energy after work for doing enjoyable work activities. So, they can benefit from this these facilities for recognize with new enjoyable work. Thechnology wide choice for people. So, for example, I work in an oil company my income is enough. that I not only save money but also I have three off days in during the week. Its This means I can going to travel or hill walking. While However, my father worked in on a farm. He always worked, but cannot could not obviate our elementary needs, therefore we never thinked to thought about our enjoyable needs.
Another my argument is that, nowadays people can follow their plan. Todays, the world is very ordered and much more reliable than past. Therefore, they can match their plan with society. This orderly system helps to them finishing work ontime. Too Also, the world is higher security a more secure place/safer than the past. Hence, they can spending time in public places, because sometimes for doing likely
(appropriate?) work they should going to public places for example watching to a football match. In addition to, people have better comunication, when use from coherent plan. They have not unsuitable expect from their time. When they going to dance clubes, they expecte exiting the place. If they do not have good comunication they cannot endure cope being close to others/ each other themselves in near together. This condition causes they more them to recognize with a new culture and custom. Therefore, they have variety of choices for spending their time.
To put everything in a nutshell, in spite of the undeniable fact today people doing things, which they like to do, because they have a deferent condition for life such as they have more ability and can afford and they to follow their plan. I say one thing In short, today people always take risks, bcause they want to enjoy from their life.[url=http://www.academiacafe.com/pf/newreply.php?tid=164&replyto=80180#][/url]
دليل به كار بردن بعضي كلمات رو نمي شد فهميد مثلا deferent ، اگر اشتباه تايپي نباشه اين كلمه به معني بيرون برنده، خروجي يا از روي احترام مي تونه باشه. همون طور كه اگر بخواهيم به يك خارجي فارسي ياد بديم وقتي بهش مي گيم "بله" و "آري" هر دو يعني yes بايد ياد بگيره كه اين دو كلمه به ظاهر هم معني كاربرد يكسان ندارند و اگر فرضا كسي صداش كرد نمي تونه جاي بله بگه آري. ما هم نمي تونيم بدون اطمينان از كاربرد كلمات فقط چون لغت نامه معني مشابهي براشون گذاشته ازشون به جاي هم استفاده كنيم.
(11-04-2015, 10:42 PM)Kobani نوشته: .
people better gain knowledge in school or out of school.
فقط من این متن رو تو 35 دقیقه نوشتم. اگه میشه بگید برای رسیدن به 30 دقیقه و کمتر باس چیکار کنم.
In these days, people have been considering good better methods to educate themselves, due to because humans have always tried to advanceing in a rational way. While some people maintain that education outside school is the better method to learn, there are others holding the idea that learning in school is more beneficial. As far as I am concerned, education in school is more effective in that not only are schools is achieved used to participate in an academic situation environment, but it is a socialized socializing method.
The first reason which (that it) should be maintained her is that going to the classroom is an enhanced method to learn (if using "learn" do not use "knowledge", otherwise write gain knowledge) knowledge. Students be can find suitable answers for their quiestions, because they ask from the teacher or they are be faced with a variety of questions from other students. Therefore, they learn new knowledge information. For example, most of schools in our country use from the online system after their class time, because they believe this method helps to them always ask questions and participate in an academic atmosephere. Additionally, students use from various facilities. They by going to the lab, library etc. They use from them to identify with learn lessons effectively. Besides, it causes learning process become last (didn't understand what you meant, maybe you wanted to say: it helps the learning process). To illustrate, students have geogrphy lessons, it which needs maps, lab and another material to imagine well-know countries and the situation location of hills, rivers etc. Hence, the lab and library are good places to touch reliaty (???) of topic.
Another factor which deseives deserves to be considered is that during class students are taught to learn social skills. Classes is are suitable opportunities to join to study in groups. Likewise, they be can consult with each other, and then recognize with gain new experiences, because other students have different viewpoints. It causes they them to learn new methods to study, solve problems etc. For instances, students, who be join to groups are more likely to talk about their problems with their co-workers in future. They think about this the topic beside together, and they help to themselves to find a solution. Apart from what was mentioned, students find friends. They design a personal plan for their break time. As well as Also, they spend time beside each other, and they be talk about their private life and local culture. Or they spend time outside school in activities such as mountain climbing, and during these long trips talk about themselves and through these mediocre activities learn social skills ( instead of: Such as, students be find friends, and then they going to hill walking. This trip is long time, and they spend time with together. They should be talk about themselves till enjoy from their time or they play beside together. These activities are mediocre method to learn social skills.) . It This causes students to recognize with new customs, cultures event languish languages. Hence, they be can enhance their knowledge about other people with different beliefs.
To put everything in a nutshell, education in school is a wise decision, owing to helping people easily promote advance/develop their knowledge and they become socialize. It is Highly recommended is that countries should be build advanced schools to absorb more students for help to society.
اين متن از قبلي بهتر هست. اشتباه داره و هنوز كمي ترتيب مطالب مشكل داره ولي مانع از فهم نمي شه. صحيح نوشتن رو فداي تند نوشتن نكنيد، اگر غلطها زياد باشن فهم متن رو بسيار دشوار مي كنه.
كاربردهاي the-can-be-from رو بيشتر مطالعه كنيد، بخصوص مثالهاي بيشتري رو ببينيد تا بتونيد علاوه بر آشنايي كلي با شيوه استفاده ازشون به راحتي به كار ببريد.
Whether you think you can or can't, you are right