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(14-09-2014, 11:11 AM)sepinaz نوشته: این هم پنجمین و آخرین متن فعلا تا ترم بعدIs competition good?
Generally speaking, I think competition is not only good but also it is necessary to advance in your career, education, etc. But However,one an important point is that we should be able to discriminate between competition and jealousy which is really harmful for the person’s mental health.
At first, I want would like to speak about competition and specify its boundaries. Competition means making yourself better in comparison to another one person who that is better than you in a specific aspect of life. So as you see competition is just trying to reach to the summit earlier than another one. It is somehow good because in this way, you try to adjust your paces with another one’s and make yourself faster without slowing down that person. So competition will make you more successful and you will always keep in mind that your current position is not the end and there are higher positions to reach to.
On the other hand, we have jealousy. When you are jealous of another person, you will try to make yourself better but meanwhile at the same time you will focus on hindering that person from trying more and inadvertently most of your concentration will be the other person not yourself. You will take try every scheme to reach to the goal of defeating that person, but because he is attempting with his own pace without paying attention to anyone else, you get stymied and it makes you nervous, impeding you from trying to reach to your own goals.
So in my opinion competition is good as much long as it doesn’t turn to jealousy. It will make you compare yourself with your peers and try to be better than them. So especially for people who have a lot of diligence, competition would be a good way to get familiar with higher summits and try to reach to them.
(25-09-2014, 08:53 PM)neo1992 نوشته: من تافل آزمایشی امیر بهادر شدم 95 اما رایتینگو شدم 17سعي كنيد تا تسلط كامل به كلمات نداريد ازشون استفاده نكنيد. به كارگيري كلمات ساده تر ولي به شكل صحيح ارزش بيشتري داره تا كلمات دشوارتر اما با اشتباه.
سه ماه فرصت دارم وضعیتو بهتر کنم . میشه با تصحیح این رایتنیگ کمک کنید
Integrated Writing
In these sets of material, the article introduces the concept of team work and expresses a number of advantages for it, for instance, higher progress speed, better development of the project because of wider range of knowledge and skills of team than of each of the individuals, on the other hand, the lecturer states an experience conducted by a company cast doubt on efficiency of team work.
First, the reading article claims that because of higher knowledge and a wider range of skills of a team than of an individual, the project conducted by a team would develop better and more efficiently. On the other hand, the lecturer states that a company which conducted a team work project found out that some of the members took advantage of other team member’s hard work and didn't contribute to the project's progress at all. It is evident that these people had a free ride, and this refutes the article's point which claimed that a project would better be conducted by a team than of an individual.
In addition to that, the article articulates that a project would be managed faster and more expeditiously by a team,. on the contrary However, the lecturer cast doubts on this statement by saying that usually lower development and progress speed is observed when a project is led by a team, because team members have to spend a lot of time to reach an agreement, and obviously although a consensus is essential for a team work, it is time consuming too as well
Last but not least, the article's allegations regarding about team work being rewarding and team members higher satisfaction about the outcome is proven false by the lecturer, when he expresses the company comprehended that some team members had more influence on the others, and usually these members' ideas are counted as more creative and beneficial and when some of other team members' warnings of abortiveness of such ideas are neglected these members not only are not satisfied by their team's decision but also feel disappointed when the undesirable results of the team's decisions are blamed on all of the team members including them.
آگه هم بتونید راهنماییم کنید که چه کار کنم و تمپلیت های مناسب بهم معرفی کنید ممنون میشم
(02-10-2014, 12:37 PM)tahy نوشته: Parents' involvement with their children's studies - Past Vs Presentگاهي جملات زيادي طولاني شدند. نوشتن جملات با ساختار طولاني و پيچيده خوب هست، ولي وقتي بيش از حد طولاني بشه هم از دست خواننده خارج مي شه و هم اشتباهات دستوري ممكن رخ بدن. nowadays يكي مونده به آخر به دليل تكرار مجدد در خط بعدي براي زيبايي جايگزين شد.
Nowadays education is an important section part in all peoples' life, especially young people's - who are the future grownups-, because, their future job and life style depends on their education. Since parents know this importance and they want a brilliant future for their kids, they are paying more attention to this part of their children's lives.
First, previously parents did not know much about education, and children's future position in the society was not relevant to their education either . I remember once my father told me that when he was going to school his parents could not help him since they were not educated, and but he tried and tried a lot to got educated finish his education, and finally he received found a good job opportunity. He also helped his brothers and sisters, so now my father and his siblings have high academic degrees and good jobs. Now all of them know how important it is to be educated and they have encouraged their children to get in to prestigious universities.
Second, A high percent of parents these days are academically educated-this makes them experienced- so they know what is good for their children because they have a good knowledge on education and since they are employed, they know what is good for their children and what improves their future. In this case they can guide their kids in on to the right paths, that take them to a brighter future. I remember the time that I was going to choose what to study in the university,. My dad helped me a lot on that subject, he discussed a lot of many things with me which that was very helpful and made me choose Physics as my major and I am really proud of it. While parents in the past did not have these this helpful knowledge so they could not help their children as much as parents nowadays . today
To summarize, since nowadays parents know more about education and how valuable education is to their children’s lives thean parents in the past, and as most of the parents have high academic degrees these days they have the knowledge and experience to help their children make good/better decisions.
(05-10-2014, 09:49 PM)neo1992 نوشته: ممنون میشم نظرتونو درباره این رایتینگ اینتگریتد بگیدcyclopedia كه به كار برديد اگر اشتباه تايپي نباشه خيلي قديمي هست و الان استفاده نمي شه. جملات بيش از حد طولاني استفاده كرديد كه بهتر جاي ويرگول هاي متعدد گاهي از نقطه هم استفاده كنيد.
Online encyclopedias Vs. printed encyclopedias
The reading article states that while online encyclopedias are beneficial they have some very important problems that makes them unreliable, on the contrary the listening article disagrees with the reading passage, and refutes all of the allegations expressed by the reading article one by one.
First, the reading passage articulates that because users who are not academically trained are involved in the process of writing online encyclopedias' articles, these encyclopedias suffer from a lack of academic credentials and reliability,. However, the listening passage states that neither of the offline nor online encyclopedias are without faults and errors, but the online encyclopedias have one advantage that the offline ones don’t have. The online encyclopedias are viewed by plenty of users every day and therefore they are more likely to get corrected if an error is observed, and in this sense not only are they not less reliable but also actually are with have fewer error and faults.
In addition, the reading article claims that online encyclopedias are susceptible to hackers and vandals, and this provides them with an opportunity to tamper the materials in the cyclopedia and fabricate wrong information, on the contrary, the lecturer believes that online encyclopedias realize the importance of internet security, and use strategies like utilizing read-only article formats and hiring expert and professionally trained special editors to prevent any fabrications.
Last but not least, the reading article states that online encyclopedias are too focused and present the viewers with articles that are partial and biased about what is important and what is not in an article. Once again, the lecturer refutes the point claimed by the reading article by saying that because space is not an issue in online encyclopedias as in offline printed ones, the information is more diverse and not only this which is not a bad feature, but also an advantage that online encyclopedias have over offline ones,. and Also, the lecturer actually believes that it is these are printed encyclopedias that are vulnerable to bias viewpoints stated by professional but few editors who write these encyclopedias.
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