25-09-2014, 08:53 PM
من تافل آزمایشی امیر بهادر شدم 95 اما رایتینگو شدم 17
سه ماه فرصت دارم وضعیتو بهتر کنم . میشه با تصحیح این رایتنیگ کمک کنید
Integrated Writing
In these sets of material, the article introduces the concept of team work and expresses a number of advantages for it, for instance, higher progress speed, better development of the project because of wider range of knowledge and skills of team than of each of the individuals, on the other hand, the lecturer states an experience conducted by a company cast doubt on efficiency of team work.
First, the reading article claims that because of higher knowledge and wider range of skill of team than of an individual, the project conducted by team would develop better and more efficient. On the other hand, the lecturer states that a company which conducted a team work project found out that some of the members took advantage of other team member’s hard work and didn't contribute to the project's progress at all. It is evident that these people had a free ride, and this refutes the article's point which claimed that a project would better be conducted by a team than of an individual.
In addition to that, the article articulates that a project would be managed faster and more expeditiously by a team, on the contrary, the lecturer cast doubts on this statement by saying that usually lower development and progress speed is observed when a project is led by a team, because team members have to spend a lot of time to reach an agreement, and obviously although a consensus is essential for a team work, it is time consuming too.
Last but not least, article's allegations about team work being rewarding and team members higher satisfaction about the outcome is proven false by the lecturer, when he expresses that the company comprehended some team members had more influence on the others, and these usually members' ideas are counted as more creative and beneficial and when some of other team members' warnings of abortiveness of such ideas are neglected these member not only are not satisfied by their team's decision but also feel disappointed when the undesirable results of the team's decisions are blamed on all of the team members including them.
آگه هم بتونید راهنماییم کنید که چه کار کنم و تمپلیت های مناسب بهم معرفی کنید ممنون میشم
سه ماه فرصت دارم وضعیتو بهتر کنم . میشه با تصحیح این رایتنیگ کمک کنید
Integrated Writing
In these sets of material, the article introduces the concept of team work and expresses a number of advantages for it, for instance, higher progress speed, better development of the project because of wider range of knowledge and skills of team than of each of the individuals, on the other hand, the lecturer states an experience conducted by a company cast doubt on efficiency of team work.
First, the reading article claims that because of higher knowledge and wider range of skill of team than of an individual, the project conducted by team would develop better and more efficient. On the other hand, the lecturer states that a company which conducted a team work project found out that some of the members took advantage of other team member’s hard work and didn't contribute to the project's progress at all. It is evident that these people had a free ride, and this refutes the article's point which claimed that a project would better be conducted by a team than of an individual.
In addition to that, the article articulates that a project would be managed faster and more expeditiously by a team, on the contrary, the lecturer cast doubts on this statement by saying that usually lower development and progress speed is observed when a project is led by a team, because team members have to spend a lot of time to reach an agreement, and obviously although a consensus is essential for a team work, it is time consuming too.
Last but not least, article's allegations about team work being rewarding and team members higher satisfaction about the outcome is proven false by the lecturer, when he expresses that the company comprehended some team members had more influence on the others, and these usually members' ideas are counted as more creative and beneficial and when some of other team members' warnings of abortiveness of such ideas are neglected these member not only are not satisfied by their team's decision but also feel disappointed when the undesirable results of the team's decisions are blamed on all of the team members including them.
آگه هم بتونید راهنماییم کنید که چه کار کنم و تمپلیت های مناسب بهم معرفی کنید ممنون میشم