15-05-2016, 07:46 AM
(14-05-2016, 10:29 PM)Eli87501 نوشته: سلام دوستان، این اولین ایمیل من برای استاد مورد نظرمه. بیزحمت یه نگاه بهش بکنید و اگه جایی ایرادی میبینید بهم بگید تا اصلاحش کنم.
@Babak عزیز خوشحال میشم نظر شما رو هم بدونم.
Dear Professor XXXX,
I am a graduate student of Nano Chemistry from University of Isfahan (Isfahan, Iran).
I worked on preparation of polyoxomolybdate nanocages containing Keggin and investigation of their catalytic application in the oxidation of alcohols and sulfides for my M.Sc thesis and published a paper out of this work in Inorg. Chem. Commun.
I am interested in design and synthesis of nanostructures, nanoparticles, and their potential applications in catalysis, and general guest-host interactions. I have read about your research interests and publications from your web page, and I found out that your research interests are in line with those of mine. I will be grateful if you consider me for any possible PhD position in your research group in spring 2017.
All in all, as a result of my attempt my overall GPA is 17.08 out of 20, and also my overall TOEFL score is 99. For more information please kindly find my CV attached to the email as well.
Best regards,
My Name
سلام
- جمله All in all, as a result of my attempt my overall GPA is 17.08 out of 20, and also my overall TOEFL score is 99 رو به پاراگراف قبلی اون منتقل کنید...
- تغییر for my M.Sc. thesis به within my M.Sc. thesis...
- as a result of attempt رو حذف کنید...
- قبل و بعد از kindly و قبل از containing کاما اضافه کنید...
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