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RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - mhz_ir - 21-09-2012
به نظرتون برای اینکه ایمیل حالت کلی داشته باشه اساتید رو Dr یا Professor خطاب کنیم بهتره؟
چون ممکنه طرفAssistant Professor باشه،من خودم از Dr استفاده کردم؟
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - MaMi - 21-09-2012
(21-09-2012, 11:45 AM)mhz_ir نوشته: به نظرتون برای اینکه ایمیل حالت کلی داشته باشه اساتید رو Dr یا Professor خطاب کنیم بهتره؟به نظر من و بدون توجه به مرتبه علمی استاد، بهتر است که از لفظ Professor استفاده کنید چون رسمی تر است.
چون ممکنه طرفAssistant Professor باشه،من خودم از Dr استفاده کردم؟
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - Apassenger - 24-09-2012
سلام
من نامه ای برای یکی از اساتید نوشتم به شرح زیر:
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Dear Prof.MMMMM
I'm MMMMMMM, a graduate student of MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, Tehran, Iran ).
I am working on my thesis about MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, and I am due to defend it in the near future.
I've read a majority of your previous activities and your publications on MMMMMMMMMMMMMM like "MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM" and "MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM". Thus, I feel confident that joining as a PhD student to The University of Jena, under your supervision will help me achieve my objectives. I would appreciate it if you could kindly take a look at my CV(which is attached to this email in pdf format), and let me know if it could be acceptable to pursue my education towards PhD degree under your supervision.
Yours sincerely,
MMMMM
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الان قصد دارم همون نامه رو بفرستم با این تفاوت که دیگه اسم دانشگاه رو نمی خوام بیارم ، که اینطور تغییرش دادم :
Dear Prof.MMMMM
I'm MMMMMMM, a graduate student of MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, Tehran, Iran ).
I am working on my thesis about MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, and I am due to defend it in the near future.
I've read a majority of your previous activities and your publications on MMMMMMMMMMMMMM like "MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM" and "MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM". Thus, it would be my pleasure to continue my education to PhD under your supervision. I would appreciate it if you could kindly take a look at my CV(which is attached to this email in pdf format), and let me know if it could be acceptable to pursue my education towards PhD degree under your supervision.
Yours sincerely,
MMMM
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به نظرتون خوبه یا می شه بهترش کرد؟
می شه همون جمله هرو اینطور مطرح کنم؟
I feel confident that joining as a PhD student under your supervision will help me achieve my objectives
ممنون می شم راهنمایی کنید
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - Babak - 25-09-2012
در کل متن خوبی نوشتید، ولی به نظر من کلمه joining وسط این جمله جفت و جور نشده و بهتر این طور بگید:
I am confident that joining your research group as a PhD student will help me achieve my academic objectives.
همچنین جمله آخر رو به نظرم این طور تغییر بدید:let me know if I have any chance to continue my studies towards a PhD degree under your supervision
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - m0h3n - 26-09-2012
علاوه بر نکات بابک، بنظرم بجای
I've read a majority of your previous activities and your publications on MMMMMMMMMMMMMM like "MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM" and "MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM"
بگید که
Looking at your personal page
بعد بگید که research interests شما بطور شفاف چی هست. این مهم هست که شما دقیقن به چی علاقه دارید و خوب به طبع زمینه ی کاری استاد هم هست.
همچنین بجای I am due to defend it in the near future
بگید I am ABOUT to defend it soon
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - mohammad_x123 - 04-10-2012
سلام،
Dear Professor Name
I am a graduated Industrial Engineering student and I am eager to apply for PhD Program in … University
In my M.Sc. thesis, I focused on the generalized traveling salesman problem (GTSP
Three papers were submitted from my thesis. One of these papers is published and the others are under review in COR and EJOR
I’ve also done some other researches that you can find them in my CV which is attached to this email
I am interested in designing exact and heuristic algorithms for variety of problems, especially NP-Hard problems
Inasmuch as I found your interests in line with mines, it would really be appreciated if you inform me about your plan to select a graduate student for your
future researches
P.S: you may access my CV which is attached to this email as well
Sincerely yours
My Name
میخواستم اگر امکانش هست نظرتون رو درباره ی متنی که من آماده کردم بهم بگید
Dear Professor Name
I am a graduated Industrial Engineering student and I am eager to apply for PhD Program in … University
In my M.Sc. thesis, I focused on the generalized traveling salesman problem (GTSP
Three papers were submitted from my thesis. One of these papers is published and the others are under review in COR and EJOR
I’ve also done some other researches that you can find them in my CV which is attached to this email
I am interested in designing exact and heuristic algorithms for variety of problems, especially NP-Hard problems
Inasmuch as I found your interests in line with mines, it would really be appreciated if you inform me about your plan to select a graduate student for your
future researches
P.S: you may access my CV which is attached to this email as well
Sincerely yours
My Name
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - m0h3n - 05-10-2012
mohammad_x123 عزیز،
لطفا این پست و دو پست ماقبل پست خودتون رو مطالعه کنید. فکر می کنم به اشکالات متنتون پی می برید.
موفق باشید
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - Babak - 05-10-2012
(04-10-2012, 11:10 PM)mohammad_x123 نوشته:لطفا به پست‌هایی که محسن عزیز اشاره کردند مراجعه کنید تا اطلاعات بیشتری در مورد تماس با استادها کسب کنید.سلام،
میخواستم اگر امکانش هست نظرتون رو درباره ی متنی که من آماده کردم بهم بگید
Dear Professor Name
I am a graduated Industrial Engineering student and I am eager to apply for PhD Program in … University
In my M.Sc. thesis, I focused on the generalized traveling salesman problem (GTSP
Three papers were submitted from my thesis. One of these papers is published and the others are under review in COR and EJOR
I’ve also done some other researches that you can find them in my CV which is attached to this email
I am interested in designing exact and heuristic algorithms for variety of problems, especially NP-Hard problems
Inasmuch as I found your interests in line with mines, it would really be appreciated if you inform me about your plan to select a graduate student for your
future researches
P.S: you may access my CV which is attached to this email as well
Sincerely yours
My Name
متن شما در جاهایی توضیحاتش یک مقدار بیش از حده و چند جا هم اشکالات انگلیسی داره. من تغییراتی به صورت زیر رو پیشنهاد می‌کنم:
Dear Professor Name
I am a graduate Industrial Engineering student and plan to apply to … University for the PhD Program.
I worked on the generalized traveling salesman problem (GTSP) for my MSc thesis and submitted three papers out of this work. One of these papers is published and the other two are under review in COR and EJOR.
I am interested in designing exact and heuristic algorithms, especially NP-Hard problems, and found your research interests in line with those of mine. I would really appreciate it if you could consider me for admission as a PhD student in your research group.
More information about me and my research activities can be found in my attached CV.
Best regards,
Your name
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - MaMi - 10-10-2012
دوستان ممنون میشوم نظرشون رو در مورد این ایمیل بفرمایند (در پاسخ به ایمیل استاد دوم که برای من ارسال کرده بود)؛
I’m going to apply for “Fall 2013” and you will find my TOEFL score in the attached file. I haven't taken GRE exam yet (I will take it on 20th this October). As the scoring system in Iranian’s universities is on 20 scale so I wrote my GPA in 20 scale, too
I’m interested in doing research on “Light Timber Frame Constructions” with emphasis on their “Dynamic Evaluation and Properties”. Because I’m preparing myself for GRE exam and work as a part time employer too, I need little time, a week or maybe two, to specify some potential research topics
Thanks for your consideration
RE: نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان - Babak - 11-10-2012
به نظر من خوبه. چند تا اشکال کوچیک دیدم که اصلاح کردم:
I’m going to apply for “Fall 2013” and my TOEFL score is attached. I haven't taken GRE yet, but I will take it on October 20th and will send you the score as soon as I receive it. As the scoring system in Iranian universities is on 20 scale, I wrote my GPA in 20 scale.
I’m interested in doing research on “Light Timber Frame Constructions” with emphasis on their “Dynamic Evaluation and Properties”. Since I’m preparing myself
I’m interested in doing research on “Light Timber Frame Constructions” with emphasis on their “Dynamic Evaluation and Properties”. Since I’m preparing myself
for the GRE exam and work part time as well, I need a little time, a week or maybe two, to specify a few potential research topics
Thanks for your consideration
Thanks for your consideration